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The tales of throng

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The tales of throng

Thy songs oh throng, 
Scattered as litters on the floor:
Thy message without language, 
Shattered by the wind, faint and poor.

Thy voice, thy choice 
Of words is slaughtered by impediments; 
Thou nurse audible noise,
Often heard but stirs sour sentiments.

Thy picture and structure 
I can’t figure out by nature,
But I’ve got a conviction that’s strong
-You sing a sincere song oh throng

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  1. Date: 6/6/2009 1:05:00 PM

    Adeleke,..congrats making the winners list and on your delicate poem ! james

  1. Date: 6/5/2009 11:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well-earned win with this art. Fantastic work! Regards, John.

  1. Date: 6/4/2009 2:56:00 PM

    Well done Adeleke, congrats>James

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 4:20:00 PM

    Congratulations Adeleke on being one of the winners in the contest. Vince

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 2:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on winning and your featured poem this week!

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 12:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on winning.

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 7:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Adeleke. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 4:04:00 AM

    Warmest congrats sweet friend on your most excellent and well deserved win. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 12:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on your peom being featured. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 10:30:00 PM

    Beautifully done Adeleke ... reads like a tribute to PoetrySoup !! Congratulations on this wonderful write being a winner in the latest contest!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 1:40:00 PM

    Congratulations on your honorable mention in the contest. Enjoy your honor Adeleke! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 7:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem being placed > James

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 5:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Adekele!

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 1:15:00 AM

    Adeleke, my congratulations to you on your success placing in PS contest, bravo! Ernesto

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 11:25:00 PM

    Adekele congratulations on Placing in the soup's contest, God Bless you,MJ

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 11:46:00 AM

    Hello Adeleke, great job and best wishes in the next round. ~Joseph

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 11:26:00 AM

    Adeleke, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 4:34:00 AM

    honey pie, this is Osaghae (revivalist4life). I loooooooooooove this poem... it's poetic. I miss you. love to hear more from your wicked pen (laughs.) see ya!

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 8:43:00 AM

    Beautifully done, Adeleke and now that you're a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 7:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Adeleke. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 11:11:00 AM

    Adeleke, Congrats on your poem making to the semi Final. It is a thought provoking poem. Wish you success in the Finals. Thanks for reading my poem Winds of Change and for your encouraging words. I have a special tie with Nigerians. I lived in Nigeria for sixteen years in Lagos, Kano and Kaduna and have visited Jos, Sokoto and Abuja. You are a great nation. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 12:12:00 AM

    Thank You so much for stopping by my poem, taking the time to read and comment on the same.Thank you very much.Your words are truly encouraging.I just read your poem now, congrats to you as well for making it through the first round.You poem really makes one pause and think, I really like it.Wish you good luck as well.

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 9:54:00 AM

    Adelke - Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round, best of luck in the finals – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 12:28:00 AM

    Thank you Adeleke - and congratulations and good luck on entering the final round. This is a well written poem. The last stanza is very strong indeed

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 9:29:00 PM

    "Thy message without language," I don't know about that. Care to elaborate?

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 3:14:00 AM

    This poem makes the reader think, I like it. Congrats on surviving the first round and good luck Regards Jem

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 10:14:00 AM

    Not sure I understand what this one is all about, but it good enough to make it to the first round. Congrats

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 6:01:00 AM

    Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/16/2009 11:46:00 PM

    Awesome write here!!! Well done with this piece Peace Fathima

  1. Date: 3/9/2009 11:01:00 AM

    A great poem Adeleke...How are you my friend? It has been really long since I've heard from you...I hope it is all fine where you are...Take good care... Always, The Arabian Wonder, Farah

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