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Midnightmare

The moon's a globule 
Assymetrically-specked
Freckled with moonrocks
Wolves roost and shriek off-tuned hymn-- -
Tufts of fear drip-drop   elsewhere.





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  1. Date: 10/18/2008 10:21:00 AM

    Chilling and eerie - and an imaginative and spirited Tanka! Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 9:32:00 AM

    Oooh, this is really spooky ... smile!! What a wonderful write, Gino and congratulations on the well-deserved win in Kristin's contest! I look forward to reading more of your writing!

  1. Date: 10/12/2008 2:19:00 PM

    The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it selected as one of the winners in Kristin's contest! I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/12/2008 10:04:00 AM

    Congratulations Gino on your win in Kristin's contest! Well done! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 9/18/2008 4:51:00 PM

    This is excellent. I like the images the pieces reflects. Your use of figurative language is excellent. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 9/10/2008 12:42:00 PM

    Amazing depth to this intricate tanka. Quite brilliant. Regards, Sara

  1. Date: 7/31/2008 11:10:00 PM

    wow this is great too.