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Hallucination Heartbreak

Tip, tap,
toes rowing
across the blue
surface of the sea-
breezes play with my hair,
tangly messes of blond rope
form for the salty air to climb-
Sun shining bright on his throne of Noon
[The moon in her brig, in chains, wrought with stars]
My skin, dry with erosion from
wind blowing to my white gown; Sails-
In blue hallucinations,
In southwest oceans,
I come to you,
I see you,
In dreams.

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  1. Date: 5/3/2010 9:15:00 PM
    Great imagery in this poem. Love, "Tip, tap, toes rowing across the blue surface of the sea.' This is a nice beginning that flows through right into the end. Chris.