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Oh Father

Oh Father,
Once bursting of life,
Has been taken abruptly,
Replaced me with strife.
Your laughter and friendship
suddenly stripped away,
A child again, I shall sit upon your lap.
I await that glorious day.
Oh Father,
Your pure body soon to diminish,
Your spirit radiates inside mine,
This love of ours has no finish.
A fresh beginning so divine.



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  1. Date: 3/9/2011 6:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Robin. Love Carol

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 3:34:00 PM

    Congrats Robin on your Epitaph "Oh Father" being featured/. Vince

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 1:35:00 PM

    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Robin. Love, Carol