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Sweet N Low

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Sweet N Low

it's hell
on the inside
but it's pour-in down
outside ,,my heart

yea it's pour-in outside
ah yea  it's raining in my heart

if i knew about 
your leaving ways
would never have given
this hurt a start

just be kindly 
to me baby
the way it was
from the start

yea treat me kindly
like from the start

if i knew bout  yo
leaven ways
could have given a
broken heart   a head start



now ya left me lazy
broke an half crazy
,,mean an angry
doing things
i just don't wanna do.......


just a simple blues tune...

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