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CANDLES

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CANDLES

Candles
flicker gently
until moonlight appears,
then move into rapid laughter
higher.

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  1. Date: 7/6/2008 3:48:00 PM
    this poem offers the reader a clear visual - wonderful job - congrats on the feature

  1. Date: 6/15/2008 2:30:00 PM
    Hello~Astrid congrats! on your featured poem.Candles are definitely a mood setter.Laugh on...B BLESS Crystal

  1. Date: 6/13/2008 4:33:00 PM
    Astrid, congrats, this is witty, light-hearted and fun, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 6/10/2008 5:12:00 PM
    My dear friend, congragulations on being featured with this lovely piece. Love, Sara:)

  1. Date: 6/10/2008 2:54:00 PM
    Astrid How lovely congratulations on your featured poem this week! Laura

  1. Date: 6/10/2008 2:47:00 PM
    Wonderful use of this form, Astrid. The end line totally took me by surprise!! This is surely a well-deserved selection as a favorite of the week here at the Soup! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/10/2008 1:43:00 PM
    Nice use of this short format. I enjoyed it. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 6/10/2008 12:29:00 PM
    Hello Astrid, Here's to the laughter! Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 6/10/2008 6:43:00 AM
    Congratulations Ivy, on your cinquain "Candles" being featured. Vince