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Metaphor Haiku Poems | Haiku Poems About Metaphor

These Metaphor Haiku poems are examples of Haiku poems about Metaphor. These are the best examples of Metaphor Haiku poems written by international PoetrySoup poets

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'the sea'

(beautiful!) immense and Poseidon-like,--the sea washes o'er my soul.


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The Internet: Return

A void of Facebook
Creativity dies here...
Procrastination!


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haiku fanatics

haiku fanatics stifling creativity laying down the law inflexible minds smothering self-expression toeing language lines simile is out personification too metaphor's a crime icicles are fine as long as they aren't crystal and they mustn't rhyme ripping haiku rules rebel verse must be contained I should be ashamed! wonder if Basho stuck rigidly to the rules observed tradition? haiku from the heart give metaphor wings to soar let the words fly free oops I do believe this is strictly senryu not haiku at all!
After reading all sides of the haiku debate about how it should be written and indeed beyond haiku and into the writing of poetry in general, I really only have this to say: life is not perfect and if art imitates life it stands to reason that poetry cannot be perfect either. I think the writing of poetry suffers from perfectionism and I find that the more I read about the rights and wrongs of writing, this technique and that technique, this form and that form, the more of an inhibitory effect it has upon my work. Life is constantly changing and evolving and therefore poetry should do the same. What is being published today at the cutting edge is mainly modern haiku and free verse with a definite shift towards more rawness and edginess and I welcome that. Life is not perfect and has very little rhyme or reason, so how can it possibly be captured in neat little stanzas and strict syllable counts? And so when writing haiku I will write my own version of it, what personally pleases me and what I'd like to read myself - I've ripped up my rule book. :-)


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The Less I Have

the less i have of
the additional use of
the more it breaks down


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Rainbow

Beautiful rainbow.
Your laughter - crystal raindrops
reflecting the light.


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Haikus About God: VI

The body: sacred
We’re all made in God’s image
Hence... circumcision?


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Lifting the fog

weightless white blankets
sailing on sighs of relief
re-birthing new life

©Elly Wouterse

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Blue water

fragile waves ripple
limning smooth gleaming mirror
empyrean blue

©Elly Wouterse
13.3.2014
# nature


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Haikus About God: IV

God made all people
But some better than others?
Stop being silly.


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Winds of changes

black clouds disappear
in today's brilliant sunlight
cold shoulders vanish

warm winds of changes
hitchhike on hottest sunlight
for drying my tears 

its warmth is healing
my offended heart and soul
each shining moment

© Elly Wouterse


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