Zephyr's Touch

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Cindy the cat has got where she comes to me out on the porch and wants to sit in my lap...Princess the Chihuahua is not liking it..Princess likes Cindy except when she gets in my lap..Just like children..

The morning zephyr's touch Gentle cool blessing sent Fireball on horizon Soon heat on earth will vent Bright yellow now the sun Roosters' crowing increased Glad to see the sun up And feel morn's warming heat Caligraphy cat comes To take my pen away She wants all my time now All attention no play Princess jealous small dog Doesn't want that cat at all She snarls and snaps leaves lap Cat just sits on me malls She thinks her claws feel good Digging into my flesh She purrs as if pleasure She hurts me by heck

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Don Johnson

Date: 5/29/2012 4:50:00 PM

hehehe...doggies n cats...jealous little rats... gotta love em though?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2012 2:18:00 AM

of winds and pets so finely done, sara... you make my day spin... lovely work of art!..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2012 3:51:00 PM

haha, I love how this turned into the touch of your pets!! Stanza four was really cute.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2012 3:42:00 PM

Sara, aweee...even cats adore the wind... I feel like meowing all of a sudden... And what about that pooch.. tap it away.. This is very cute... I like playful cats... Thank, you for the clear image, and enjoyable kitty enjoying the wind...thank you so much,..pd

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2012 3:16:00 PM

Always a pleasure to read your poem Sara, like it very much. - oxox Anne-Lise

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/27/2012 3:05:00 PM

Spectacular imagery!!! My favorite lines is The morning zephyr's touch Gentle cool blessing sent Fireball on horizon Soon heat on earth will vent,Stunning write!!!