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Breeze Makes her Feel well when Drapery swell in Air. Soft touch She a blush He an ocean Breeze
=========== N.B.The contest Poetic Palindrome requires to write two Lanternes with the last word of Lanterne one and first word of the second Lanterne should be one. That's why there are nine lines instead of ten lines Dr. Ram Mehta 19-10-13

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Date: 10/31/2013 8:34:00 PM
I admire your use of varied forms... It convinces me that you attempt to be a serious poet..... You meet the challenge well..... Regards... Jake
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 10/31/2013 8:44:00 PM
Thanks, I have attempted nearly 92 literary poetic forms till date
Date: 10/23/2013 7:21:00 AM
Soft and beautiful!
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:38:00 AM
Natural rhythm is flashed from breeze to breeze. Good luck, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/20/2013 8:17:00 AM
not a form I know but the words flow beautifully Richard much enjoyed reading Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/20/2013 12:45:00 AM
This is a win to me ! I love it Doc, the simplicity , beautiful write .
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