Yuck

When Mother Eagle returned with her wormy swag Each of the eaglets grimaced and gagged "Eat that slimy thing? You've got to be kidding! We'll wait and see what Dad bagged!" 7/29/11 Received 6th place in "Pure Thoughts on Nature" contest

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Lisa Cooper

Date: 8/13/2011 8:42:00 AM

lol another funny love your sense of humor

James Fraser

Date: 8/11/2011 3:04:00 PM

Made me chuckle Susan with this koolio Limerick, nice one, and many congratulations on your win :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2011 7:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 8/4/2011 10:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!

John Freeman

Date: 8/4/2011 1:43:00 PM

As humans feed for sure Susan. Smile! Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses

Judy Ball

Date: 8/4/2011 12:38:00 PM

hahaha Loved this. The ungrateful, spoiled, thankless little bratletts. What will they do if Dad eats it all,, And brings nothing back for the eaglets. God job my friend, Congrats on the contest. God Bless, JB

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2011 10:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2011 7:34:00 PM

Congrats Susan on a super win with this witty piece of poetry luv..enjoy...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2011 7:03:00 PM

smart one,susan...cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2011 7:32:00 AM

Cute..Enjoyed with a chuckle..Good luck in John's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2011 12:44:00 AM

glad you went the funny route with yours too. I really like yours, Susan. Hope it does great in the contest.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/2/2011 4:08:00 PM

haha, yup, hopefully Daddy Eagle had something better :) cute limerick, Susan, enjoyed this one, and thank you for your wonderful comments in my collab with Chris, that was fun to write :)

Jack Horne

Date: 8/2/2011 9:46:00 AM

LOL, that's two good laughs I've had today, thanks to you : )

Steven Cooke

Date: 8/1/2011 5:29:00 PM

so true in life, love the humour here good write.