Youth

smiles that shoot the room as girls appear speaking in tongues youth can understand life is difficult in the flash and go youth, the true aphrodisiac

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Daniel. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 3:36:00 AM

Daniel, Excellent writing! I like the first one best, but both are really great. Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2010 6:28:00 AM

Well done for the contest, also thanks for your comment on my zoo, have a nice one,..p.d

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 3:25:00 PM

Very interesting one, Daniel. Yes, i love that last line! andrea OH, and Congrats!!

Date: 5/5/2010 8:18:00 AM

Oh for carefree life of the young. You have me smiling with this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/5/2010 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 6:07:00 AM

Congrats on the win

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 6:06:00 AM

Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 5:13:00 AM

Congrats Daniel on your HM in Brian's contest.. with this cute and all too true Monoku... enjoy your special honor .. with luv. from the "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/5/2010 5:06:00 AM

congrats on your HM in Brians contest Daniel!-Robert

Destiny Orschell

Date: 5/3/2010 6:05:00 PM

Great and awesome poem...we youth are just amazing speaking unspoken languages just brilliant...hahaha...just kidding we aren't that great...Love the poem Daniel. keep it up. Love Destiny