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Yours Is the Earth

Yours is the earth! And that is our expectation of you, For you to express that promise in becoming that person, Without holding back, expect the will! That speaks to you in not so many words. That says to you "Can you become that person in this world or not? And answer that one question all have come to ask since time began, Is this world enough for you? Is this earth something you can make your own? Then if you can answer that one question all have asked then yours is the earth, And you are better for knowing it then you are for being nothing within it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/7/2010 9:01:00 AM
Very promising approach. With a depth which you have tried to catch. Lovely write Keep it up. We expect lot many more from you. And thanks for kind comments on my poem Flow River Flow. Hope you would like the Boatman's Song as well in many parts. With best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 1/6/2010 2:13:00 PM
I see you are a philosopher, Andrew!! Very astute. I enjoyed reading this. And thanks for your very nice comment to me. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/6/2010 11:31:00 AM
I like the second one that starts off with a positive statement that draws the person to question how can this earth be mine what is this poet going to say. Just my opinion not chiseled in stone. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Welcome to soup and looking forward to sharing thoughts. Sara
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Date: 1/6/2010 7:55:00 AM
I prefer your first version of free verse poetry.. I like the intricate lines for the reader to discern while reading it.. U have great potential Andrew with a great write like this to contribute to the Soup readers.. thankxxx for reading my poetry today.. I have many many inspirational poems posted amongst my 527 selections .. as well as many love poems... looking forward to reading more of yours... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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