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You'Re the Man, Baby

Ah, the time when we begin Brother to brother skin to skin I got here first and you know why I got her first to watch over you guy! Sometimes, I think that Ma likes you better BUT hey, you’re in a diaper, she’s knittin’ me a sweater! Then I think “Hmmm” you’re getting all the cuddles But, but, you can’t go out and splash in puddles. I’m your BIG brother, you’re my best fan No ones better than you bro you’re the man. Brother to brother, skin to skin Ah, the time when we begin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/28/2011 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest with this very lovely poem, Deb! Sorry this comes a little late, nevertheless it is genuine. Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Annalise
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:52:00 PM
YO there... you're a natural rhymer, debs... whooty congrats for the glory win :) huggs
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Date: 5/25/2011 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your win in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:41:00 AM
Lovely fun write, Debbie. Many congrats on your win : ) So you don't recommend iambs and anapests together? LOL. I've never tried writing a Sapphic poem yet - sounds like fun, though - I love her 'I have not heard one word.'
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:02:00 AM
Little brothers really do look up to their big bros, Deb. Lucas will be following Logan around for quite some time. And, hey, he's getting the sweater! Fun poem. Congrats on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:00:00 AM
Love that line - brother to brother, skin to skin. Congrats on the win. Mike
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win in the Brotherly Luv contest with this excellent entry on that special feeling between kin.. enjoy another great win..luv..
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:10:00 PM
So sweet. And you were smart to dedicate to Logan and Lucas.Gosh, I should have done that!! Deb, if I do your contest.What should I try to do? I don't have a clue.
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:35:00 PM
AWWWWWwwww. Look who has one up on his lil brother! Ma likes the big boy better, huh? The proof is in the knittin for sure. Nice brotherly love poem and best to u this day. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:25:00 PM
So clever, Debbie! A masterful write about this dilemma.:) It can be vexing at times, for kids to understand the youngest. They do bond like crazy afterwards.:) Love this piece! Mikki
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Date: 5/21/2011 12:33:00 AM
* “After Viewing This Deeper Than One May Find Upon First Glance * I Beheld Much Love Amid Its Beautiful Verse * Dear Beautiful & Highly Gifted Debbie Guzzi. * The Humour Mingled Amid Truth & Love * Is A Perfect Poetic Mixture In Wonderfuls Faves * Loved The Little Brother Being The Number #1 Fan * Sooo Very Lovely * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses * Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *
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Date: 5/20/2011 7:32:00 PM
Very cute write Debbie.Best wishes..
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:45:00 PM
a great piece of poetry, good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:45:00 PM
Good one , Deb. Best wishes in the contest. Lainie. Please check your soup mail. Lainie
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