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Your Words

Your words, are projectiles dripping with Arsenic and aimed at my heart spitting out darts and swords that expertly find their mark and draw blood Your words, when aimed at others are carried by Pixies and sprinkled with honey and sugar coatings that melt in their ears and taste of confection Your words, cloak me in pain and guilt for undone atrocities and imagined factors as your blame riddles my soul causing it to prune, wither, and crust Your words, accusing, spiteful, degrading, malicious paintings of what I once thought was an indestructible bond of Love that no one should be able to destroy and yet you do so with your words. I've no soul left no appetite for your touch no desire to want for anything except to become deaf so I will no longer have to listen to your words

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 6/25/2009 6:39:00 PM
You bring back some regrets. I used to talk to my sister like that until I knew better. We're very close now, but I still feel bad. Words can hurt. I watch what I say now before I load my mouth.
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Date: 6/23/2009 5:31:00 PM
Very, clear message, Sandra. I hope it wasn't personal, very well written, love jm
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Date: 6/5/2009 3:36:00 PM
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Date: 5/20/2009 4:52:00 PM
OMG!!! this blew me away. the first two stanzas were amazing. this excites me and will be on my fav list as soon as i finish this. you've got the gift and it shows very loudly in this one. with so many phrases that catch the reader by surprise from begining to the end. and i felt it. you feel good poetry and i felt this. i can tel good poetry because i make a copy of it and take it home. it'll cost me a dime. JOHN HENRY LOVING III
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Date: 9/18/2008 4:23:00 PM
Mental abuse can be much more devastating than physical abuse. You capture the pain very well. Congratulations on having this very powerful poem featured. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/15/2008 6:58:00 AM
Wow. So sorry I ever missed this amazing poem. Congrats Alexandra on a most well deserved featured write. So powerful and well written. Awesome! Love, Shar
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Date: 9/15/2008 6:10:00 AM
Your poem speaks a very sad message for words can be the hardest of all things to endure - congrats on being featured
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Date: 9/15/2008 5:22:00 AM
Words can be healing or weapons. Congratulations Alexandra on "Your Words" being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 9/14/2008 6:54:00 PM
Powerful poem with vivid imagery. Congratulations on having you poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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