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unrhymed tercets written in 10 syllable counts perfect in how i see the truth in three verses per line meaning the trinity of my words and thoughts from behind the curtains that can see a cloud 

Hell is a place always burning wicked deeply flames inside devilish games pop playing the winner in ending first pride Getting found out within this falsehood cries a beggar of their own making caught out envy crosses paths hiding behind scenes Turns upside down vanity within vice friendship's smile becomes vague under the veil clouds the truth that always shines through the key Blindly insulting words aches consume pain with hate loyalty never dies it lives forever true in a heart that honours

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Date: 10/18/2016 5:47:00 AM
A captivating deeply spiritual poem that depicts the fight of good and evil! Excellent pen my friend, Liam! A seven!
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Date: 10/17/2016 9:52:00 AM
Hi Liam! Wow!This is a very sad, profound and heartbreaking poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.So deeply sad n' heartfelt and I can feel your pain all the way in this piece here too.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness and it makes me so very sad and it breaks my own heart in pieces just thinking of anyone hurting you in any way in the past, present or at any time Liam.Just praying here now that you're really okay today and that no one has hurt you again in any way or form recently. Excellent piece!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're really okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you here in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very peaceful n' lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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