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Your rose of Valentine, I’ll be tonight You’ll touch the scented velvet of my heart My petals moist and tender bring delight For you, my love, can make the blooming start Unwrap me like sweet chocolate in your hand I'll melt upon your tongue in luxury One taste of me another will demand A Valentine’s indulgent ecstasy I gift to you my body; come and play Do what you will to get the greatest thrill I will be yielding as you have your way My wants and needs subjected to your will This valentine, my love, I’ll be to you Your chocolate, rose, and gift, your dream come true Eileen Manassian

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2015 8:41:00 AM

Dropping by with a hug.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/16/2015 9:33:00 AM

Then drop by anytime, my dear! :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/16/2015 2:42:00 AM

Your heart gives the gift of glow to the one who knows it's flow...your body bestows benevolent feast...your desires yeild to the demands of delicious fire...I love the complete gift you give Eileen...J.A.B....I also like how the beautiful pictures you chose depict the fantastic range of your love emotions! I like the middle picture most...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/16/2015 9:38:00 AM

Justin....you came back. How sweet! :) Yes, I can see why you would like the middle one more...You're more into modern type of art...I have my flare for that as well, but...I'm a bit of a traditionalist when it comes to artwork! ;) Your comment is delicious to my taste, Justin. Delicious fire is the best kind to burn and be consumed in, is it not? Love must be a FEAST...a meager repast leaves one famished for more....I love a meal that is decadent and indulges all my senses....I give without restraint. Thank you for your lovely second visit, my Eagle...Hope you are soaring today.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/15/2015 7:01:00 PM

Oh my Eliheen I cant catch one never mind a flock! I love coming back to you, because you keep adding such beautiful photos!!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/16/2015 9:40:00 AM

I do enjoy the hunt for photos, Arthur. I'm passionate about pictures....I am forever taking photos and collecting them....I am a collector of words, quotes, stories, poems...and images. When I'm down...I go through the photos I've collected and wait out the storm. Thanks for the second visit, my dear...You're always welcome.

David Meade

Date: 2/15/2015 8:07:00 AM

Love the Avatar but miss your flowing hair. The taste of Chocolate on the tongue and the scent of the Rose . . . mingle in your precious love gift . . . delicious.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/15/2015 11:51:00 AM

I'm glad you had a taste, David. :) Hope you had a lovely Valentine...I keep waiting for new poems from you. Please...do write something sweet. I'm waiting anxiously. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/15/2015 6:30:00 AM

I hope you were treated special yesterday.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/15/2015 11:56:00 AM

:) We had a lovely evening with several other couples. It was sweet. Thanks for asking.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/15/2015 12:28:00 AM

My door is unlocked, I await you!!! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/15/2015 11:49:00 AM

Me and all the women on the soup! ;) Naughty Arthur! Thanks for the visit, dear.

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/14/2015 6:53:00 PM

My enchantress your Valentine gift is so beautifully worded "unwrap me like sweet chocolate...melt upon your tongue". You weave such an indulgent sensual image, how could any man hesitate to join you in "A Valentine's indulgent ecstacy". Love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 7:31:00 PM

Thanks, Shane.....I'm glad you indulged me by reading and responding. It was very sweet of you. :) Wishing you all the best....Hope it was a lovely day for you...

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/14/2015 4:32:00 PM

Oh OH~ Very Very Nice! Happy Valentines Day Sweet Poetry Queen~! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 7:30:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. Hope you had a good one!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2015 2:06:00 PM

ooh such sultry imagery Eileen i love this romantic write:-) a 7 from me happy valentines Day hugs jan xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 4:08:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. It's been a busy day. This poem had some problems in the rhyme scheme. I fixed it, incase you want to give it another read. Thanks for passing by. Hope you had a lovely day...HUGS

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/14/2015 1:47:00 PM

As always you deliver such a fine poem regardless OF TOPIC. " I gift to you my body; come and play Do what you will to get the greatest thrill I will be yielding as you have your way My wants and needs subjected to your will" Great Stanza, every red bloodied man's fantasy!! A7 and a fine write..

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 4:09:00 PM

:) Glad to hear that affirmation from a Red bloodied man's perspective. Thanks, Robert, for stopping by. Hope you have a grat day celebrating the love of your life. I had some rhyming issues with this poem...I was in a hurry to post. I had a very busy day. I've fixed the glitches in case you want to give it a second read. Thanks for the visit. Hugs

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/14/2015 1:10:00 PM

"For you my Love, can make the blooming start..." You'll be the fire, the frisk, and the phenomenon of love Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 4:11:00 PM

What a romantic avatar of you....with rose pressed to your lips, Justin. I love it! :) Thanks for your visit to my poem. I wanted to find the perfect pics and the perfect rhyming, but...it was such a busy day, that I didn't do my best on this. I've fixed some of the problems, in case you want to give it another read. You know your opinion matters to me. Thanks for passing by...happy Valentine's Day! HUGS

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/14/2015 11:02:00 AM

such a sweet poem Eileen... another great pen.. Wish you a Happy Valentines Day and a great weekend.. lov n hugs,nad!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 4:12:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. Same to you. Glad to have your lovely visit. HUGS

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/14/2015 9:35:00 AM

This poem is indeed a wonderful Valentine gift, for all of those privileged to have read it. But i also see this poem as a stand alone gem that would enhance the poetry world also.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 9:39:00 AM

:) What a lovely thing to say, Harry! :) Thank you for visiting me on Valentine's Day! I hope you have a great day. Sending you hugs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/14/2015 8:24:00 AM

Total surrender greatest valentine treat Eileen. Wish you HAPPY VALENTINE.love

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 9:34:00 AM

Yes....to give in totally for the other's pleasure is a lovely gift. Thanks for the visit, Rajat. Wishing you a happy Valentine as well.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/14/2015 8:06:00 AM

What a wonderful valentine treat!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 9:35:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. I'm sure you have a lovely treat planned for your sweetie. You are a romantic man. All the best.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 2/14/2015 7:32:00 AM

Nice Valentine gift. Good day my friend

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 9:35:00 AM

Thank you! All the same to you.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2015 7:29:00 AM

Thank you for a most lovely poetic gift, Eileen! Pity the other one is not for me to unwrap:) Have a lovely Valentine's Day!! hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 9:40:00 AM

;) That was a sweet poet, Paul. Loved it! Have a great day today, Partner. Sending hugs

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/14/2015 7:16:00 AM

Very sensual and romantic poem. Beautiful Janet

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 9:44:00 AM

Thank you, Janet. I've since edited my poem. I was in a rush when I published it...It has some errors that a friend thankfully caught for me. I'm glad to have this visit from you. Hope your day is turning out well! :)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/14/2015 7:15:00 AM

A beautiful gift Eileen...... Hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 9:45:00 AM

Thank you, Tim. Hope you have a lovely day. :)