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All trees travel skyward All leaves seek to hug sun All flowers wish to emit scent I too crave for the crescent Whether sky or sun or crescent Of course all don’t deserve There is the order of high and low Dews smile at the jagged judgment Dews, those churned feelings from core Dews, those burned candles in dark Dews, those moments of light and dark Dews, those pains when you closed the door But dews are little moments trivial Very loose molecules unstable It’s beside the point if it smiles or frowns High trees laugh aloud skyward You wave your plaits and tweet Accept the truth bitter or sweet _______________________________________________________ July 4, 2016

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Date: 7/8/2016 3:11:00 AM
Nicely written poem - great free verse and beautiful wording
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/8/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/6/2016 2:59:00 PM
GREAT sentiment , Accept the truth bitter or sweet. Words for us all to live by, Probir!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2016 5:31:00 AM
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Date: 7/5/2016 7:31:00 AM
A well-developed poem from Alpha to Omega dear Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/6/2016 12:30:00 PM
Thank you... regards ... sorry for the delayed response ...
Date: 7/4/2016 4:07:00 PM
Probir, this is very good work a 7. Thank you so very much for reading my poem “ We Will Drink Some Nectar Sweet”. Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/5/2016 4:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve ... Love.
Date: 7/4/2016 1:03:00 PM
probir, this reads like a beautiful hymn.. much enjoyed!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/5/2016 4:46:00 AM
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Date: 7/4/2016 7:52:00 AM
- Beautifully written - Wisely line in the final, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/5/2016 4:47:00 AM
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