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Your Soul Your Spirit Is Really You

When you think about it Hey I'll give your thoughts a jerk And tell you how I know These things really work Your soul and your spirit is really you And your mind tells your body What it should do Your mind bears your thoughts And they hold the key I can't think for you And you can't think for me Your thoughts are your future They were also your past If your not happy now You can change them real fast Your life is a play Which you have to act Your thoughts are your script And will turn out exact So think on, be happy Change all the cast Don't dwell on misfortunes Let go of the past For now is the time In your thoughts you can mould What you want in your life To have and to hold And from this day forward Like you are to wed Marry these thoughts Inside your head For you never knew That you had this great gift Create your own life Give your thoughts a great SHIFT!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/28/2010 5:25:00 AM
Awesome write Simone - So such truth in your words - I love your attitude - A fab share for everyone -:)
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Date: 3/16/2010 4:32:00 PM
thanks again my friend its good to see someone writing with a little inspiration... people need that sometimes... there's always hope. no one can take that from any of us. keep inspiring. M.W.Patrick
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Date: 2/6/2010 9:32:00 AM
wow I love this! You are a true talent! Thank you for sharing....makes you think. Love it : ) ps thanks for you comments!
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Date: 12/26/2009 1:48:00 PM
easy flow....great message... it should be on a poster in a class room!!! thanks for the comments...
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Date: 12/24/2009 1:21:00 PM
Great thoughts Double S , hard to do for me now, but each day it gets a little better
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Date: 12/20/2009 7:56:00 AM
Brilliant write, and so true, will be reading a lot more abe
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Date: 12/8/2009 5:01:00 AM
lovely...thank you for the beautiful and inspiring words...I really anjoy your work! <3 Angela
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Date: 11/27/2009 11:08:00 AM
This one is really good to.I like the rhyme.Thank you for all your comments.Hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving.
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Date: 11/22/2009 6:05:00 AM
thanks Simone! I needed this today! jimbo
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Date: 11/22/2009 5:15:00 AM
Very good, upbeat, positive and inspiring.
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:13:00 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations for being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Simone, on having your well-written poem featured this week. It was enjoyable to read and contained excellent advice. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 11/10/2009 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Simone. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2009 10:33:00 PM
Very wise words and advice, an inspiration to read and very well written. Congrats on your poem being featured. Caroline.
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Date: 11/9/2009 7:38:00 PM
Very good poem. I really enjoyed reading this and it will go to my favs. Congrats on being featured.
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Date: 11/9/2009 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/9/2009 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Love Pam
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Date: 11/9/2009 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on you r poem being featured this week. I really enjoyed it. Regards Janette
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Date: 11/9/2009 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week Simone >> James
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Date: 10/27/2009 6:03:00 AM
Love the idea here. The "Bible" tells us whatsoever a man thinketh in his heart that is what he is (not a direct quote). You have brought it down to a level of understanding. Keep writing,Sara
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Date: 9/27/2009 8:34:00 AM
Wonderful poem Simone, a delight to read>>James
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Date: 9/16/2009 12:07:00 PM
Very inspirational, Simone. Sometimes it seems like our lives are getting away from us and we are losing control. Been there. Although it is difficult to regain control, it's the only solution to leading a happy, productive life again. I needed to hear this today. Thank you so much for the inspiration. God bless you. Love, Carolyn And welcome to the Soup Family!
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Date: 9/15/2009 12:12:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us in your excellent poetry today Simone. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2009 10:25:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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