Your Smile

I would sail the seven seas I'd search every land and isle I would climb the tallest trees To see a glimpse of your smile

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Date: 12/7/2014 3:26:00 PM

: ) Cute!So cute this is!!

Date: 12/7/2014 5:19:00 AM

So very sweet!

Date: 12/5/2014 4:32:00 PM

more than sweet, this speaks volumes in few words, tim.. adorable.. huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 12/5/2014 4:34:00 PM

Thanks nette...have a beautiful weekend... Huggs

Date: 12/5/2014 7:28:00 AM

great expression of desire

Tim Smith
Date: 12/5/2014 4:33:00 PM

Thank you Nathan

Date: 12/5/2014 4:14:00 AM

- A smile .... makes your day great :)) - Lovely poem, Tim !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 12/5/2014 4:17:00 AM

Thank you A-L ....have a beautiful weekend.... Hugs Tim

Date: 12/5/2014 12:40:00 AM

Wow tenderly beautiful Tim! Hv a blessed day my friend!

Tim Smith
Date: 12/5/2014 1:45:00 AM

Thank you dear Upma.... Hugs Tim

Date: 12/4/2014 9:17:00 PM

That is some kind of smile!! Nicely done my friend

Tim Smith
Date: 12/4/2014 10:23:00 PM

Thank you David....it is killer....cheers

Date: 12/4/2014 7:43:00 PM

Ahhhh, loves smile. Nothing warms the heart more.

Tim Smith
Date: 12/4/2014 10:22:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend..a smile goes a long way with me...hugs Tim