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Your name is like candy I held it in my mouth Dissolved it until it coated my tongue and all it knew was you It was sweet enough to rot teeth And was a treat for the ears But now every time I hear it All it does is make me sick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/6/2016 9:58:00 PM
If love isn't true or strong enough to sustain us through the storms, pain and even hate can slip in. You have penned bittersweet love, perfectly!
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:13:00 PM
a bitter sweet poem Alex:-) hugs jan xx
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