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Your Loving Eyes

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Your Loving Eyes

Reminiscing of days filled with laughter and joy
Waiting for a new adventure to begin
Mangoes and peaches, palm trees and beaches
God, I wish I was sailing again
I remember the islands and the ports we had visited
Sailing under God's blue skies
I remember your charms, wrapped up in your arms
Gazing into your loving eyes.
Though the years have passed and the days are gone
The memories remain forever more
Someday my friend, we will meet again
And walk along that distant shore.
The fishing village nestled in a small cove
The smell of fresh fish and the sea
Call me it seems to relive my dreams
And the days you were here with me.
As I walk in the sun toward the marina
Where my little fishing boat lies
I remember the sights and the warm summer nights
Gazing into your loving eyes.

Copyright © Vince Suzadail Jr.

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  1. Date: 10/18/2008 3:34:00 PM
    Congrats on being featured this week Vince! Peace, Jaime

  1. Date: 10/18/2008 10:39:00 AM
    Excellent rhyme scheme and a loving message. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup! Peace always, John

  1. Date: 10/18/2008 8:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on the feature this week. really enjoyed this one, was written before I joined. Love the visual content of this poem. Well done. Love Heidie

  1. Date: 10/17/2008 10:20:00 AM
    Vince this is a loving poem. It is full of love and it puts you there on that sailing vessel. What an experience to have your love in your arms as you navigate thru paradise smelling that ocean fresh air sipping on lyour cold favorite beverage of fresh cocnut water. I envy you Lol. I dare to dream captain thanks for taking me there with you. I'm afraid my budget will be magoe ice cream from the local super market God bleesy Michael

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 7:12:00 PM
    Lovely piece! The imagery sets perfectly in the mind and the reader is happy to travel across the shores! Congratulations on your poetry being featured. Love, Chitra

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 6:17:00 PM
    Vince Congratulations on your featured write! Laura :)

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 3:05:00 PM
    Vince great poem that sure makes on long to sail - Congrats on being featured this week - god Bless

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 11:03:00 AM
    Well it sure is sweeter than "Your Lying Eyes" ... LOL ... almost reads like a waltz. Thanks Vince and a good for you feature ... smile ...

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 7:51:00 AM
    Congrats on your feature poem this week Vince.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 4:50:00 AM
    A great love poem Vince, with all the flavor of a Cezanne painting. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 3:21:00 AM
    This is beautiful. The imagery is excellent. Congratulations on being featured.

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 10:44:00 PM
    Cngrats Vince for this beautiful write being posted on feature. A great job. I enjoyed this. Very beautiful. Love, B

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 8:58:00 PM
    ah yes Vince - would be lovely to go sailing - I can feel the wind in my hair! So romantic..

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 3:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on this week's feature, Vince! This calls me to the sea!! (and I'm a girl who loves the mountains!!) Great poem! ~Carrie

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 9:53:00 AM
    Congrats on being feature Vince. A job well done.

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 5:30:00 AM
    Congratulations Vince in this extremely beautiful poem being featured this week. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 10/12/2008 5:30:00 PM
    Vince, Congratulations on having this poem featured! It's beautiful! I love the imagery, almost feel like I've been there. ~Trudy~