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Your Bright Umbrella

the door has been closed you stand outside in the rain soaked in your despair open your bright umbrella storms pass; walk sprightly onward

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 11:16:00 PM

Andrew, Congrats on your "When A Door Closes WIN." Luv ~LINDA~

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/5/2016 12:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/5/2016 10:34:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent Tanka. I find these types of forms really hard to do. You have done an excellent write on the theme, a different but wonderful write. I Love the vision, then i do Love to be out in the rain, helps me think. Hugs....Mike. Definitely a fave and a seven.

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/4/2016 8:30:00 PM

Congrats!!! on your win Andrea...god bless...^WW^

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/4/2016 9:04:00 AM

Your works are truly heartfelt Andrea! I enjoyed this one! Congratulations and a 7 for you! :) _HANS

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/4/2016 3:14:00 AM

Yet another lovely win Andrea.. big congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2016 12:51:00 AM

wonderful metaphor Andrea many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 4/3/2016 7:24:00 PM

A wonderful tanka Andrea..congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Daver Austin

Date: 3/30/2016 1:56:00 PM

Yes, the umbrella metaphor. One word and I'm delighted. Love, daver

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/28/2016 9:24:00 PM

Very uplifting and inspiring, and also appropriate in a way, as we are transitioning from a gray winter into spring... Beautifully penned, Andrea. Good luck in the contest!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2016 4:13:00 PM

Good one with underlying overtones of metaphoric language..Reads like a winner to me...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/28/2016 12:09:00 PM

Is this a metaphor for life? Rainy here today in NYC. Good luck in the contest and check out my latest when you get the chance. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/28/2016 3:52:00 PM