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Your Blooming Horse

father teach me how to ride your blooming horse so I can bring home unto thee, my God without any scratch this soul o’ mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/20/2009 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:47:00 AM
Otsenre, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:23:00 PM
nicely written, creative
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Date: 9/14/2009 8:07:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Otsenre! Adeleke
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Date: 9/14/2009 4:47:00 AM
This week's featured poem is very expressive of your love for God. Congratulations on your work. Sara
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Otsenre. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 9:46:00 PM
Best of luck in the next round...Raul
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:00:00 AM
Congrats on all 3 poems making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/19/2008 6:17:00 AM
Excellent, this is really well written, i love the feeling it gave me...it is very 'blue' visually, for me, loved it. Kristin
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Date: 9/19/2008 6:13:00 AM
I really enjoyed this short metaphorical poem - You did a great job on this - God Bless
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