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Young Love

 The petals open perfumed
the stamens offer pollen
fruit grows to full round ripeness
petals dry fruit falls

©GG 27/08/2013

Copyright © Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

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  1. Date: 8/1/2014 10:54:00 PM
    Mandy Very creative write about love and the way you compared it to a flower. Thank you for the nice comment on my Why God poem

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 7:34:00 AM
    What an awesome way to show young love Mandy, and you won with it as well :) hope you are having a great week thus far! hugs Wilma

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:57:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:11:00 PM
    awesome win....SKAT

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:06:00 PM
    congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Yup! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 1:58:00 PM
    so descriptive and daintily expressed, mandy.. cheers to you for your win, mandy!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 7:19:00 AM
    This is very visual. Well expressed, congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:47:00 AM
    Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 4:43:00 AM
    congratulations on your win. .pd

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:13:00 PM
    loving this one again on the winners' list, Mandy. Congrats to you.

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 3:08:00 PM
    Very soft winning work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Nice metaphorical expressive poem. Thank you for your humorous comment about the alligator and crocodile difference. You made me laugh really loud.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:45:00 PM
    What a cool way to show young love, thru a flowering fruit!!! Nice one, mandy.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:44:00 AM
    this is so different from you Girl, yet as love matures so does your poetry.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:23:00 AM
    - Lovely written, Mandy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)