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Below is the poem entitled YOUNG ELDER AND DEATH which was written by poet BL Devnath. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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                                  After I am being born I crawl at home
                          with my soft small legs and little fingers help me
                                      I try to stand up but fall and fall
                        My lovely mother watches  me with her sweet smile 
                                      comes near me and talks with me 
                                   rubs my head with her beautiful hands
                                       my innocent baby  life grows up

                                       After I am being grown up
                              I want myself to be a perfect human being
                         with proper education having all round development
                                     My love life family life and social life 
                         be full of all beauties with the blessings of God I want
                                          I go ahead with the time

                                       After being an old man I feel 
                        Whatever I have got out of my whole life's experiences  
                           at the end I must meet with doom space is my home 
                                    I am living with no physical body but
                              peace only peace is there I never found on earth
                                              there ends all gloom

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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 10:37:00 AM
    This is wonderful and so beautiful bl. Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 8:54:00 PM
    Transformation described well in your words, BL..good luck with the contest :)))

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 7/8/2013 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot again for reading my write and for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 5:26:00 PM
    Ah yes the grub he stumbles all through life, but death does make a change, the flapping of spirit angel wings, the one God has arranged....

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 7/8/2013 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi! my genius friend, you are always so. Thanks......,loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:04:00 PM
    I like the poem, and the stage you propose for the readers,,, good luck in the contest BL., have yourself a good night... Linda

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 7/6/2013 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A lot thanks from my heart goes to you for putting nice remarks on my write and for wishing me good luck here. Have wonderful weekend. Loved always, bl