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You Were The One Then

by Betty L. Hobbs

Then came the breeze
That blew like the wind
And took you away
Away with the wind

You were the one then
And now you are gone
And I’m in my home
A place to write
I am all alone

You were the one then
When I was young
And you were then
Seems things change
Like the wind
Then comes the rain
Then the pain

Now there’s happiness again
I’ve felt the breeze
I’ve felt the wind
A change in me
I feel
The breeze
I’ve found Jesus
On my knees

© Copyright 2004 Betty L. Hobbs

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  1. Date: 12/31/2010 6:53:00 PM
    Betty, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/28/2010 10:28:00 PM
    Very descriptive. This reminds me of the old fifties song "The Breeze" by Kay Starr.

  1. Date: 12/28/2010 7:03:00 AM
    Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 8:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Betty. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 6:03:00 AM
    Good to know this about you..Enjoyed your work..Congratulations on being featured on homepage..Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 7:34:00 PM
    Enjoyd it.Impressive thoughts.-kashinath