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You the Bard

The house sits on a hill beyond the way The back yard seems empty save a dirt path Windows twist in the dark as in the day The scene is terrifying with great wrath Horrid the place would create a bad bath You may exit the house through the back door Screams will break out of your lungs, then some more The terror you would see in the back yard Would be greater than the worst bedside sore For dead you would be, the world’s greatest bard
Russell Sivey Contest: FANTASY Sponsor: SKAT Aces- 6/14/2013

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  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:02:00 PM
    great descriptions, congrats on your win Russell xxx

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 7:04:00 PM
    A wonderful win Russell

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Russell Congratulations on your fine wind. A great Dizain. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 3:28:00 PM
    Russell, I tip my hat to you on your well written entry.. Deserving of a win.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:58:00 AM
    Oh Russell, I don't know why but, I feel in love with the way you write. You are a dreamy poet, and I noticed your poem took me through a dark path and I enjoyed the way you ended the poem. The World's greatest BARD. , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ thank you for taking your time and entering my contest. Luv* SKAT

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 12:00:00 PM
    enjoyed this scary write, my friend

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 12:37:00 AM
    If someone were to put an Open House sign in the front yard, I'd back away very slowly. Bard means musician, right? For creepiness I would mark it high... nicely done!

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 6:58:00 AM
    Creepy, I am sure this will do well.