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you never know what your jealous of

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you never know what your jealous of

i watch her put her make up on
as if it hides the fake
i watch her lay in that bed
tanning her skin human bake
i watch her smile in their face
as she stabs them in the back
taking everything for herself
feeding on what they lack
i watch her make them cry
as she dominates the school
i watch her walk home
in clothes so cool
i watch him hit her to the floor
behind closed doors
i watch her beg for help
as he only hears "more"
i watch her lay back in bed
as the bruises set in
she wakes up in the morning
and lets the judging begin.

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  1. Date: 12/7/2009 7:33:00 AM
    yes it is fictional in a way. I just find alot of the times the people your most jealous of have so many things your happy you dont have to deal with. But im so glad you all like it! thank you

  1. Date: 7/31/2009 9:15:00 PM
    I hope this piece is just fictional, Samantha. I like the way you develop the story playing with words and using vivid images, Great job! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/31/2009 7:24:00 AM
    This is a very sad write Samantha and it happens more everyday. I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup and wish you the best in your writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2009 6:49:00 AM
    Great write Samantha>>James

  1. Date: 7/31/2009 2:35:00 AM
    This some real sh-- right here, unfortunetly a sad reality for some. I liked as a read because ut sounds authentic.... enjoy your morning.