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You Make Me Whole

Here I am again,

I'm so far away from you,

I've fallen apart,

A scattered mess of what I used to be,

I always tried so hard,

I thought I could do this by myself,

I've lost so much since I began,

I've fallen apart,

But you remind me of who I am,

When I see your face,

I know no other love,

I know I'm yours,

You're everything I know I lost before,

I fell apart,

I came to you a broken mess,

Because you make sense of who I am,

You're all I need to be whole again.

I love you...

Copyright © Jay Smith

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  1. Date: 10/6/2009 3:49:00 AM
    Thank you James for sharing your heartfelt write. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 6:18:00 PM
    This is a wonderful write! :)