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You Lied

With tears in my eyes 
I came to you
But you lied 
You looked straight at me 
You said it wasn't true 
That lady was lieing to you 
Isn't that what you said ?
That you'd always be true
Who was that girl who answered?
All the while you kept me at home.
You said you wanted a wife kept 
Safely at home  
I trusted  in your words
Evan though I really always knew 
That you were a playboy 
That you would never be true!

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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 11:24:00 PM
    Same guy? It's interesting how some things can affect us and we write about them again and again. Many of my romantic poems are about the same person from long ago. well, I should get to bed now. thanks so much for reading so many of my poems. Luv, Andrea

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/15/2013 2:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poems Andrea ;}
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:44:00 PM
    Debbie, this is a good read. We always want people to be honest with us. I believe that honesty is the best policy. Thanks for sharing.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/29/2012 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yea, sometimes it takes a minute or two, to figure it out. Yes I'd rather have honesty. That way you know where you stand. thank you for reading my words,,,,, have a great day ;}
  1. Date: 1/20/2011 7:58:00 PM
    This is simple to read and understand, so it has no problem in conveying its message.

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 4:13:00 PM
    That dirty dog!! Keep your pen going on this one! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 8:47:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Debbie. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 2:51:00 AM
    Love frustrations expressed with a sign for the playbot, Debbie