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You In Me

you are the glint in my eye you are the sinew in my arm the very DNA in my cells you are my offering of time father, your actual bones bore me through childish dreams and youthful ranting angers to find as i pulled away as far as i could be myself that circles go 'round to find myself back at my beginning there with your corny jokes and light admonitions to me to be a man, not unfeeling, but gently strong, happily human as you were in yours my half-life or half-my-life is owed to all of you given as your progeny my own, my founder, my father © Goode Guy 2011-06-18 for father James M.

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Date: 11/29/2012 9:26:00 PM
Very beautiful and meaningful poem. Thank you for sharing!! God bless you!
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:00:00 AM
Inspiration has filled the pages of poetry over this weekend here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to have been able to read your poetry here today Goode Guy. Have a wonderful Sunday I will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:22:00 PM
Lovely passionate expressions on the love of the father when the father's day is round the corner, Goode
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