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You Can Hurt

If it pleases you to hurt Then, you hurt others too Your loved ones, your family And even your neighbors too Don't be fooled Hurting yourself is like a magnetic shock wave You're only hurting yourself? Not entirely, but you hurt people around Though life seems so hard Though enemy seems to increase Though you grow weary and marred How about looking unto Jesus The author and finisher of our faith According to His greatness and mercies We shall overcome trials and are blessed Let's keep the faith, holding fast Problems you may have? O. look onto one another near by They have it too, don't believe me? Go to a convalescent hospital Maybe you'll hurt too! But... If it pleases you to hurt Then, you hurt others too

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Date: 7/10/2010 11:37:00 AM
Thought provoking. Excellent advice. Nice going, Davin. Thanks for your comments. Rgds Ralph
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:07:00 AM
Thank you very much for that in sight. :) Cheers! (Sorry for the late response)
Date: 7/9/2010 5:20:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. there is a free verse contest posted if u care to enter your poem .. a good way to get read and noticed on P.S. with luv..
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, sorry for the late response. Cheers! But I will definitely look into the contests of free verse once I start keep up with my writing.

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