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The Cat on Top of the Tree Papa in a deep sleep on the tree branch the tallest tree, his fortress on the ranch Snoozing in the jade shade in such delight from the spirit of the young and sunlight Pa, Please! Wake up. Help me up to the top to see the buttercups from the treetop My brothers and sisters won’t play with me Lee loves to pounce and pretend it wasn’t he Pinky is scrawny but very queenly seen cleaning and meowing constantly Missy hisses at everything she sees even fuzzy bees that wheeze through the breeze Norris is curious and mischievous very outlandish and ridiculous Pa, Please! Wake up. Help me up to the top to see the buttercups from the treetop My brothers and sisters are not like me you’re the one I want to grow up to be 1/14/2016 Contest: For the love of kittens Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri-Carroll

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Date: 2/6/2017 2:17:00 PM
Wonderful write Eve...Congrats on your win
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Date: 1/22/2017 6:31:00 AM
Such a lovely POV of kittens. Amazing...keep it up! :)
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Date: 1/17/2017 8:42:00 PM
Such cute little kitties! Good luck!
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Date: 1/17/2017 6:34:00 PM
Each with their own personality. You're a cat lover for sure Eve.
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Date: 1/16/2017 11:57:00 PM
Wonderfully stated admiration.
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Date: 1/17/2017 8:52:00 PM
Thank you, Afzal, Hugs
Date: 1/15/2017 9:29:00 AM
awww, adorable
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Date: 1/17/2017 8:49:00 PM
Thank you, Jack...:)
Date: 1/14/2017 11:41:00 PM
Great poem Eve, I love my cat too. He's very bold, will take food out of mouth of pit bull ! He climbs all the trees.
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Date: 1/17/2017 8:48:00 PM
Kittens are so adorable... You have a brave cat or a dog that loves your cat a lot... Hugs
Date: 1/14/2017 7:46:00 PM
aww what a charming poem Eve i especially love the 'jade shade' great line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/14/2017 9:06:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, how are you doing? Hugs Eve

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