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You Are My All - For Rain and Dark Contest

And then it hits me. My limbs fail as I slide inexorably to the floor. She is gone. Cocooned within a catatonic coma, all that was my world is contracted into a singularity of desolation as the abyss engulfs my creaking frame. And one by one, my senses forget their lines as they coalesce into a jumble of white noise and blank, black horizons. The boom of a thousand drummers pound relentlessly through my brain, my clenched fingers pulsating in response to this terrifying, trembling self-embrace. My tongue curls at the metal bitterness of acrimony, giving shape to the shadows which creep unfettered into my undefended psyche, shutting tight the weary windows of my eyes. And now comes the rain. In sodden response to my dilemma, hissing its disapproval of my circumstance and pounding the rooftops in rattling discord. Tapping impatiently in judgement upon me and gurgling its displeasure; hammering the windows in utter contempt. Squeezing tighter my crushing seizure. A billion lights invade my mind as breathing ceases, but the valley of darkness sees a sunrise as her voice pierces the gloom - and I am once again alive. 23rd August 2015

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Date: 9/29/2015 2:15:00 PM
Hey Bill, BIG congratulations on your win in the contest! Excellent writing and I especially love the "breakthrough" moment. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:37:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb first place win with this awesome write Bill!
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:22:00 PM
great ending, SHE comes and sets it all right!! great way to do the theme on rain and dark. I can't recall if I tried that contest or not . BIG congrats on top win with Rob!
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Date: 9/27/2015 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Bill! I enjoyed reading the experience. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/27/2015 1:08:00 PM
I like this, especially the last line-- len carber
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Date: 9/27/2015 12:07:00 PM
Making it larger than life-a true transformation of a poet! Congrats on your win, Bill!
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:20:00 AM
Bill, congratulations on your Top win:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win Bill!
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 9/27/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thanks, Tammy - I actually shed tears writing this. What a softie ;)
Date: 9/16/2015 3:08:00 PM
I got an N/A again ... wish I knew what I was doing wrong :(
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Date: 8/23/2015 2:59:00 PM
Is this something you have experienced, It's moving, sounds like your whole heart is in it, lovely xxxxxxxxxxxx
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 8/23/2015 3:02:00 PM
Thankfully, Wendy, it is not; it was written in response to the contest, but I had to become someone else to write it ... don't like him! ;)
Date: 8/23/2015 12:38:00 PM
Not since Dave Mason's album, "It's Like She Never Left" have I felt through art the searing pain of someone leaving. Mason used an instrumental of tangible pain. My relationship is healthy, I know love, yet I felt myself being left when I read you. Need I say it? Oh so very good. CayCay
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 8/23/2015 12:53:00 PM
In truth, I am very happily married ( 15000 days next March 14th ) so I had to go to a very dark place to write this. I had to write it quickly as I was being drawn away from my place of safety. I really appreciate your kind response to my scribbling. ;)

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