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I strolled slowly into the morning mist Moisture collecting on face a fresh natures kiss Songbirds sing to praise the day A welcome tune to take me away My long cotton nightgown still tossed from sleep Clings to my frame my hair a messy heap And I think of you still lying in my bed Your eyes closed breathing slow curly hair on head It is as if you are a gift from up above No treasure have I found that is worth this love Your touch and hunger for my soul Completes me love it is you that makes me whole And I stroll back and peer at you again You have brought me life Where I thought was only end.

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Daniel Turner

Date: 2/9/2016 3:33:00 PM

Very sensual, sounds like you are a very lucky young lady. You write magnificently. Will have to put you on the fav list!! Peace

Kelli White
Date: 2/9/2016 4:50:00 PM

Thank you Daniel. You are funny. People read what they are in the mood for. Which changes like the weather

Jan Allison

Date: 1/30/2016 6:35:00 PM

beautiful sensual poem Kelli:-) hugs Jan xx

Kelli White
Date: 1/30/2016 6:39:00 PM

Thank you very much Jan

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/29/2016 10:06:00 AM

Passionate!!! Your loving soul is showing... hugs and kisses, Jack xox

Kelli White
Date: 1/29/2016 12:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Jack. You are a dear

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/28/2016 5:09:00 AM

A nice poem of fulfillment. Delightful.

Kelli White
Date: 1/28/2016 5:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Probit

White Sage

Date: 1/27/2016 5:18:00 PM

well written Kelli...excellent

Kelli White
Date: 1/27/2016 5:30:00 PM

Thank you very much WS.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/27/2016 12:53:00 PM

So beautifully crafted... simple language detailing a very private moment lovingly remembered. Well done Kelli! Best wishes, Keith

Kelli White
Date: 1/27/2016 1:34:00 PM

So sorry Mr. Mo. Open your heart to a lovers warm glow. A kiss to wet your lips , a hug to bring you close, and a sneeze from your nose. Hahaha

Kelli White
Date: 1/27/2016 12:59:00 PM

Thank you Keith so very much. I value your dissection of my verbatim

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/27/2016 10:21:00 AM

Beautiful words such as this will always exist because of Love's sweet bliss which is impossible to resist because it constantly persists the heart to reminisce about True Love and all that consists of emotion and devotion on passion's list....simply Beautiful kelli....;)

Kelli White
Date: 1/27/2016 10:39:00 AM

I thank you for enjoying this as much as I. Soul pleasantries drive passion high.