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You are beautiful. like the moon. cracked and cratered. You life meteors. bombard. You do not pull away. from the earth. enlightened and light. -maria 11.8.15 *remembering typhoon haiyan victims and survivors

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 8:08:00 PM

Hija, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2016 3:48:00 PM

Lovely finding this on your poem list today!

Skat A

Date: 1/15/2016 9:01:00 PM

well done......Love SKAT

A. Juman

Date: 11/8/2015 2:50:00 PM

Hija --Wonderful write you take me away--Excellent 7+++ -----DO look me up let me know what you think

Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/9/2015 6:50:00 AM

Thank you, Zaladin, for the appreciation! Will visit your page

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/8/2015 11:14:00 AM

Hello, my crazy beautiful friend. Lovely to see this new post and I get to comment first! I like the style of your tribute. Short and simple but oh so sweet and heartwarming. Will be reading more...hugs!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/9/2015 6:52:00 AM

Hi! My crazy lovely Kim! Missed poetry soup and your visit to my page so I started posting again ahahah. So glad you like this piece! Warm hugs back!