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Below is the poem entitled You which was written by poet Mar Star. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I've prayed for light & peace to erase you from my mind,
He told me to keep my thoughts from you instead to write verses for you.
Is a punishment I must do from keeping myself away from you.

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  1. Date: 6/2/2012 2:22:00 AM
    aww thatsa good poem, it is hard sometimes to erase certain things from mind right away, and i too had to erase past hurts from mind, but writng things down gets it out, I imagine life is maped out in pencil and the Lord walks with us rubbin al that is behind us out, so if life tries to make us look back there is nothing there, take care God bless from diane

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    Date: 6/2/2012 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I figure writing was sort of a therapy for me to get back in my senses and it has helped me release all the negative things i have within... I feel great!!!!! Writing is very therapeutic have a lovely weekend.