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At the end of my tunnel I use to see the light. It was built not with rock but with thick vines green and bright. I could see my path it was there I always walked, sometimes I would sit and think, listen as plants talked. Sweet peas, marigolds and pansies were at my side, I lived my life with friends in who I would confide. The air was scented in sachets rare, coloured in muted tones stripped down bare. Growing above me were angel lamps, also gorgeous dahlias, on the ramps. I remember in the large blue pond, a rare pair of two toned swans, while below the weeping willow, an almost sleeping chipmunk yawns. Convergent ladybugs clustering for warmth on the ground, drifting leaves acted like an ocean wave just to confound. Back then switched on lights would decorate the night sky with stars but now alarms sound as they shut me down behind these bars.
22~10~2014 Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Contest Name:Pick a Title Yesterdays Joys

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Date: 11/14/2014 7:42:00 PM
Well done, Maurice. Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:58:00 PM
Your images were delightful and the poem well written. Really enjoyed this... thanks for sharing and congrats on your win. btw: Loved that 6th couplet !!
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Date: 11/14/2014 3:00:00 PM
Maurice, congratulations on your win for this poem. I enjoyed the imagery and metaphors. Sandra
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:38:00 AM
many congrats on your win Maurice:-) Hugs jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/14/2014 3:54:00 AM
No your style of writing :)...hugs Tim
Date: 11/13/2014 10:09:00 PM
well, looky there. a win for you too!! I believe this counts toward your contest wins, it's only HM's that don't count, Maurice. I have a friend here who knows a lot about Soup. i will ask him about that theory of yours!!
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:41:00 PM
You used a Jan twist to perfection... Love it..
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2014 2:38:00 AM
Are you saying I'm a bit warped Tim?!!! Hugs Jan x
Date: 10/22/2014 4:24:00 PM
Wow, you have impressed me yet again my friend, this is fantastic! a 7 and fav for me :)
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Date: 10/22/2014 3:49:00 PM
Gosh, this one is so unusual from you. Rhyming couplets form and also the subject matter. I am guessing it has to be metaphorical. It's very creative! The last part makes me think of someone in prison. Whether this is your reality or not, I think many of us can feel that our lives have become like a prison. Sure enjoyed your imagery in this one, Maurice.
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:54:00 PM
wonderful imagery Maurice - such a deep sad ending though. Hugs Jan xxx good luck in the contest. xx
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