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Yesterday's Griefs Are Today's Joys- Lune

Yesterday's grief, today's joy through a gloomy night twilight tears turn to morning dew Kelly's lune- 5/3/5 Inspired by pic#1 Written August 2nd, 2015 For contest "Pretty little lunes" by Andrea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/17/2015 12:02:00 PM
A positive message in lovely form! Congrats on your win, Upma! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/17/2015 12:41:00 AM
I like the phrase "twilight tears". Well done for your win, Upma. Jullia, xx
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Date: 8/16/2015 8:44:00 PM
Hi Dr Upma, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:39:00 AM
Dr Upma, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
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Date: 8/15/2015 9:31:00 AM
This is nice--real poetry!
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:30:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:16:00 AM
Grats on your win, beautifully done!
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Date: 8/15/2015 5:43:00 AM
Lovely turn from night gloom to bright dawn; a positive outlook! ~ Congratulations on your lovely win, Upma! // paul
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:06:00 AM
Dr. Upma, you did a really nice one for my contest. Very pretty! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/3/2015 12:46:00 PM
Beautiful interpretation of the image - good luck in the contest:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2015 11:31:00 AM
This is good. Good luck.
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