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Yesterday's Beauty

In the distance the old barn leans away But still of interest to artistic eyes Appreciating the beauty of yesterday Triplet form..for the Whatever Contest...

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Joe Maverick

Date: 7/10/2011 1:47:00 PM

A timely and observant write Barbara, showing yesterdays reality, by the light of todays changes..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Barbara. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 5/17/2011 8:43:00 AM

Indeed, many have this allure for the ol' barns of yore, as you quite beautifully have proved with this write dear poet ! Great entry Barbara ! Have a great week my friend....much love, james

Derrick Burton

Date: 5/15/2011 6:26:00 PM

beautiful.....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2011 4:50:00 PM

I really liked this the first time I saw it too. Glad to see it in the winners' circle, Barbara.Congratulations.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/15/2011 6:25:00 AM

Very well written sentiments of what was conversion to what is. Beauty is beauty old and new. Congratulations Barbara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/14/2011 9:44:00 PM

sensational write barbara... bouquets for you for garnering a great spot in the contest. congrats!

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/14/2011 8:46:00 PM

Very good job Barbara! Congrats on the placement. I feel honored to be on there with you:) R.M.

John Freeman

Date: 5/14/2011 6:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem's success Barbara in Brian's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2011 1:54:00 PM

Dear LNC, let's do the dance of joy to celebrate your win! Congratulations. Love, carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/14/2011 1:34:00 PM

Congrats BG on your win!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/14/2011 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, Barbara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2011 1:01:00 PM

Congrats BG on your success in Whatever contest with this elegant entry so profound .. enjoy another beautiful win ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2011 11:42:00 AM

Oh yes, I've seen so many paintings of those old barns. We even had a "red barn" poetry contest here not long ago. As we drive along and see these old barns, it's hard not to try and imagine how they looked in years gone by. Beautiful entry for Brian's contest, dear LNC. Always looking for you in the winners' list. Thanks for your sweet comment on my dream poem. Keep enjoying those twins!!! Love, Carolyn

George Aul

Date: 5/14/2011 10:57:00 AM

A thought provoking poem....George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2011 11:50:00 PM

Yes, these old buildings can be a thing of beauty in the eye of the beholder. Good one, Barbara!