Yellow Throat Warbler

wild river perch songs Grandmother heard caress my heart

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Date: 5/21/2010 3:05:00 PM

hey Jamie! I think you have more than 1 frozen image here? rivers fish gram....The last line is a nice subtle juxtaposition..smooch!

Date: 5/8/2010 6:24:00 PM

I miss my grand moms today, they were the best!

Date: 5/8/2010 11:01:00 AM

Beautiful image, Jimbo! Now its the time to hrae the birs singing!! Thanks for your comments. This one goes to my favs...Gert

Date: 5/6/2010 9:16:00 AM

Enjoy the vivid imagery this brings to mind, James...peaceful. GOes to my favs....Love, Audrey

Date: 5/6/2010 6:49:00 AM

Beautifully descriptive and very moving, Jim. I hope the songs of the perch can be heard for generations to come. Love, Carolyn

Date: 5/6/2010 5:07:00 AM

Great write...Each generation can enjoy the same sounds and visions that previous generations did...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Date: 5/6/2010 12:07:00 AM

sounds nice, and refreshing with the sweet music of nature,..p.d.