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Below is the poem entitled Yellow which was written by poet Melani Udaeta. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The heat of the Sun
flushes your skin like a kiss; 
Soft tawny petals 
gently tickling your toes, 
Golden smiles fill the meadow.


Copyright © Melani Udaeta

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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:06:00 AM
    lovely piece, congrats on your win

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/21/2013 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara for the congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 8:48:00 AM
    Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading your colorful work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:12:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win Melani, well done xx

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 12:49:00 AM
    Yours was a lot like Susan's tanka in yellow too!! I loved both of your sunny and pretty tanka!!! congrats.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:02:00 PM
    this is an awesome choice of YELLOW , for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 6:28:00 AM
    nice tanka wishes

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:47:00 AM
    - A lovely poem to read, thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)