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Yeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaa!

This thrill? that can kill…… Ride…….. Feeeellll the WINDddwindddddddddd WHIP..whip*~~~~~~~ your skin. G forces of sensation PRIMEprime the PUMPpump* for the s e n s oaaaaaaaaaaaaaaary ~~~ deprived Air gasping open gilled life near.. yet LIFE’S DEATH**… the razor’s edged path This thrill? This thrill can kill……… Yet, composure, s e n sayyyyyyyyyy tion vvvviiiiiibrbaaaaatiiiiiiioon Die! Why die! FLYYYYYYY RIP! ROAR! RIDE! RIDE*>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the wind on this PRETTY UGLY** Harley's skin. This heartless surrogate horse without FAIL SAFE** R I D E! * alliteration **oxymorons

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 5:02:00 AM

Congratulations Deb on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "Free For All Do As You Please". Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2010 5:34:00 PM

Ya know....somehow, miss fiesty pants....I can see you riding a Harley!!! LOL !!! Great job.......and I love that word vvviiiibrbaaaatiiiion!!!!!!!! Makes my computer jiggle!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/27/2010 2:24:00 PM

This was indeed a wild ride, Deborah! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2010 1:51:00 PM

Great SOUND EFFECTS in this one, Deb! A big congrats for your win. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/27/2010 1:27:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your big win in Charles'c contest.. with this extraordinary piece.. luv it.. TEACH.. enjoy a happy weekend.. am in Mississippi with my son now..luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/27/2010 12:35:00 PM

Congrats Deb..I love the presentation..felt like I was flying...BG

John Freeman

Date: 8/27/2010 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations, Debbie on your 9th place, Agape, Moses

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/14/2009 6:20:00 AM

I love the tone^^ love it. This poem has great eeeenergyyyyy.xp i can't wait to go zoooooom zooom after i get my license this yr.lol broom broom zoom zoom!!

James Christian

Date: 8/27/2009 11:44:00 AM

im only 13 today thanks

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/24/2009 6:29:00 PM

Sounds like fun but I have a difficult time with four wheels. My son wants one and I would rather see him walk than taking off on a crotch rocket (NINJA). Vince

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/17/2009 1:19:00 PM

Can just about see you in my mind's eye.....helmet, black leather....hair wild.... freeeeee as the wind! You go girl !!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/12/2009 3:10:00 PM

Yeeeeeeehaaaaaa! Free as the breeze on your HARLEY!!! How could I miss the thrill, the chill, the wind, the G forces sensation if not a roller coaster, it must be a motorcycle.... HARLEY! Come on, Deborah!!! Tell me, please!!! LOL.. Fun!!! Dane

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/12/2009 2:36:00 PM

Deborah, Those mechanical bulls can be heartless!!! Do they have mechanical horses, too? Or did I miss this all together? Have fun!!! Always, DAS-J

Davin Math

Date: 8/11/2009 2:19:00 PM

Wow...simply WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWONDERRRRRRRRRRRRFULLLLLLLL!!!!!!!! Nice work you put on this one, love it, faved.

Diane Christian

Date: 8/11/2009 12:59:00 PM

aww a great poem, thanks for your kind comments on my poem the gift of life, thanks for the idea of the war theem contest, I wrote a poem some time ago titled what are they realy fighting for, God warned us in the bible of wars and this is what he said, Mark 13:1-23 When you hear of wars and rumors of wars, do not be frightened; those things must take place; but that is not yet the end.8 "For nation will rise up against nation, and kingdom. God bless you from diane

Edward Orozco

Date: 8/10/2009 4:06:00 PM

Good and fdun poem to describe joy, good job amd nice xomment you left me awwww... -edde

Sara Zahed

Date: 8/10/2009 1:16:00 PM

"Yeeeeeeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaa" indeeeeeeeed!!! What a "RIDE"!!! hehe...A hyper ride :)...Thank you for the warm comments...Sara...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2009 6:15:00 AM

What a wonderful way to start a new week reading your new poetry Deborah.Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Cesar Cantu

Date: 8/9/2009 5:08:00 PM

Wiiii :D:D:D this is purely energetic @@ jojojo I felt like running into walls :D:D:D jojojo wanna join me?:D:D and thanks for the comment jojojo I know of no Alice in my family, maybe I knew here from somewhere @.@ I'll tell you if I get to know about it wiii :D yeah:D:D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2009 3:05:00 PM

Interesting . Sara

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/9/2009 2:37:00 PM

good mood? enjoyed.. this was great, not just saying that. Enjoy your day.