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Wrongful Vibe

Never thinking about my actions 
Not caring about what others think
shrug my shoulders being my first reaction
others say my attitude stinks
of course i dont care
I owe no one nothing
I have not a smile to share
but I can tell you something
a small secret 
you must promise not to tell
in your mind you should always keep it
Somewhere in life i stumbled and fell
then my vibe came off all wrong
cause i really do care 
even though i always feel like i never belong
in my heart there is a little tear
 just needs a little tape
someone to show me love
not a soul around me that is fake
the best person being the man above.....

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  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:02:00 PM
    the fact that you started off using capitol letters and then slowly stopped is simply perfect.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:24:00 AM
    A wonderful piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading today Olivia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:48:00 PM
    Wonderful piece with a great ending. Michael

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:44:00 PM
    A good poem showing deep faith. Thank you for sharing this afternoon.