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Wrong Places

Lose your mind Doing time in all the wrong places Got some friends Lots of friends In all the wrong places Choose which one They're all fun Pretty faces Dressed their best Wearing less In all the wrong places On display Come what may Lined up like vases Take your chance Cash advance In all the wrong places Lose your heart Here's where to start In all the wrong places

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/15/2010 10:52:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:11:00 AM
I like your style. It feels raw.
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