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Written In Blue Mercury

snow falls as silently as sleep pressed snowflakes icicle flowers between the wind and windowpane melt their way to sill polished chrome darkness shivers ankle deep in frost night’s breath spills along the frozen glass its silver shadow rolls and condenses with the dawn night’s epitaph written in blue mercury trickles down my windowpane in the light of a new day

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Date: 1/9/2017 4:00:00 PM
Hi Forrest. : ) Very nice; really gives the feeling. Quite a planet we have.
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Date: 1/9/2017 4:24:00 PM
Doug thanks for the read and comment. Loved your "Of hope not a ray..." Very well-structured line.

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