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http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/disadvantaged_663312 Write More Poems Some people want to be pushy and shove You others may try to take advantage of But scales surely always tip in your favor When Jesus becomes your Lord and savior. With energy mass may double up on you When equality becomes part of what's true The longer you put off and continue to wait Things become worn down and less ornate. Things stable become balanced and maintain And no longer on our economy be a drain Providing jobs you and I were looking for Maybe even doing it from door to door. Now what you really, truly need is a tutor Due to modern day technology of computer And on yourself should start to get a grip Write more poems and improve penmanship. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran In response to Carolyn Devonshire's poem "Disadvantaged" dated April 15th, 2015.

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