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Some people want to be pushy and shove
You others may try to take advantage of
But scales surely always tip in your favor
When Jesus becomes your Lord and savior.
With energy mass may double up on you
When equality becomes part of what's true
The longer you put off and continue to wait
Things become worn down and less ornate.
Things stable become balanced and maintain
And no longer on our economy be a drain
Providing jobs you and I were looking for
Maybe even doing it from door to door.
Now what you really, truly need is a tutor
Due to modern day technology of computer
And on yourself should start to get a grip
Write more poems and improve penmanship.
James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran
In response to Carolyn Devonshire's poem
"Disadvantaged" dated April 15th, 2015.
Copyright © James Horn | Year Posted 2015
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