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Wow Babe

You're bringing out the boy in me falling in love, such a beautiful dream Walking on water I was floating beside you life is just like the weather I am so happy around you catching clasps the soul each and every note strokes in the gentle soft sound of you're voice Emerging from the shadows silver dancing with light glistens in something special putting a spell all over wishes Thoughts all the time magic sparkle behind these mirrors standing outside the gates you arriving breathtaking I kissed your feet one thousand times in my mind inside the space of a soul's blink Enchanting the distance sings out echoes floating within each step breathless These insides lit up warm smiling out of this world embracing eyes meet shaking with nerves you looked amazing Just want to be forever nice always good to you such a colleen warm beautiful smiling One wonder of a treasure automatically takes the heart away in a single breath gasping

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Date: 9/22/2014 7:32:00 PM
Ahhhhhhhhhh! Liam what a wonderful romantic poem, you seemed to have expressed your real feelings here, beautiful read my friend, take care...........Vera..........
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 11:10:00 PM
vera just writing how i feel deeply ,touching your comment brought tears to the eyes bless you vera
Date: 9/21/2014 2:11:00 AM
A romantic poem filled like caramel inside... Thumbs up,,, Liam
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 6:52:00 AM
smiling malik such a sweet beautiful comment thank you so kindly deeply appreciated
Date: 9/20/2014 4:02:00 PM
A joy to read old pal!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 6:47:00 AM
ken always a pleasure old pal to see you thank you kindly dear friend
Date: 9/20/2014 12:57:00 PM
Liam...another splendid write...Colleen warm beautiful smiling....She must be pleased as pie.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 6:45:00 AM
she sure is eileen thank you ever so kindly for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/20/2014 11:17:00 AM
Wow liam... so much warmth and maturity. I loved your poem. Hugs!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 6:16:00 AM
thank you so kindly rajat the heart always draws the truth passing you a big smile bless you

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