Would You Like To Go To Bed

Well pleased to meet you Would you like to go to bed Result was a slap © Jack Ellison 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2015 11:23:00 PM

haha. Funny one, Jack!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/11/2015 7:12:00 AM

Happy to see you giggling dear Andrea! Love, Jack xxx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/10/2015 4:12:00 PM

Too funny Jack! I love this funny senyru!!! I am so sorry I haven't been visiting as often!! This weekend I'm heading up North to visit my grandfather, but once I get back, I will be reading a lot from your page. Love you dear and I am so proud of you and the progress you're making! You are simply amazing!! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/10/2015 4:49:00 PM

Now how can I possibly respond to that without getting all gushy! I love you dearest Laura! Certainly no need to apologize sweet lady! I love you a whole big bunch and will patiently wait to hear from you no matter how long it takes! I am so fortunate to have such a sweet, warm friend like you! Must have done something good on my life to have so a sweetie! I love you Laura... xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/10/2015 10:14:00 AM

I wouldn't slap you SenyruJack... But sorry... gave my heart to Hubby... Still following him thru the years... and that ice cream he gets me every weekend at McDonnalds... LOL.

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/10/2015 3:27:00 PM

Thought I'd give it a shot, dear Carol! LOL xxxx

Judy Konos

Date: 7/10/2015 8:07:00 AM

That's just something you "overheard" Jack....none of those ladies looked at Jack and said No of course you were more discreet ...now let's hear the real stories Jack......

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/10/2015 8:16:00 AM

Okay, okay, a few said "let's see what you've got, mister"!!! To which I replied, "I'm a novice, so you'll have to 'guide' me along!" Love, Jackson xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 7/10/2015 4:29:00 AM

lol no wonder:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/10/2015 5:56:00 AM

Never did learn how to score with the ladies!!! LOL Love, Jack xxx