Worthless

Without him I'm nothing, Only sad thoughts are left, Really needing and wanting his love, Tired of being apart when we are meant to be, Heartbroken by Daniel, Left so hurt, Empty is the only feeling I have, Soulmates now apart, Something so amazing has ended.. Temporarily.

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 7/9/2010 12:22:00 PM

Some things happen to give us more insight to ourselves and others. It is evident in your work here, as your emotion can be felt coming from your words. I have found that same feeling to be the strength of my poetry, and hope you will have more to say not only from the sad emotions, but of the happy ones. Best to you... Dan C

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2010 8:48:00 AM

sad write,,..P.D.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2010 8:19:00 AM

sad write Megan,, but time will pass and you will heal...P.D.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 7/9/2010 3:09:00 AM

Sadness and depression throughout this write. A glimmer of hope shines through at the end. Nice write.